This lemon by Red Rover contains adult concepts from the television show Digimon.  Do not proceed if you are under eighteen or the material is illegal in you jurisdiction.

 

A comedy spin-off inspired by Digistar DBZ.  Thanks to SonimodB, Christine, Togashi, Metal Mikemon, Tank Cop, Hellravenmon, and Boss Reo for letting me write it.   This one takes places after we all watch Tank Cop’s “Memories: Part 1; The Good Old Days..” 

 

 

The Critics Series #9

 

Dark Jester’s  “Sora’s Return” Commentary

 

(Setting- Thousands of years  in the future, the greatest lemon writers are brought back to life.  No one can remember the other’s lemons.)

 

(Togashi, Red Rover, Tank Cop, Hellravenmon, and Dark jester are walking down the theatre aisles.)

TOGASHI- So where are Metal Mikemon and Christine?

DARK JESTER- Yeah they haven’t returned from the last theatre.

HELLRAVENMON- Let’s see, Metal Mikemon wrote a steamy lemon about the two of them…

RED ROVER- I think we get the picture.

DARK JESTER- Anyway it is my turn.

RED ROVER- Sounds good, let’s see what’s playing.  (Looks at movie poster.)  Sora’s Return.  Down by Dark Jester, known for his intense writing style.

DARK JESTER- Ah a favourite of my fans!  Let’s go!

(They all walk into the lemon theatre, and the lemon starts playing.)

 

Sora's Return

 

RED ROVER-  Let me guess who the star is…..

Author: DarkJester

 

DARK JESTER- And recognition for the star of the hour!

Type: Digimon lemon

 

TOGASHI- I hope so, otherwise we wouldn’t be here.

 
Rating: XXX

 

TANK COP- I think that was implied with the lemon..

18+ only please!

 

HELLRAVENMON- Do you really care about that?

DARK JESTER- Not particularly.

Prologue: The Digidestined had defeated Apocalymon and left the digital world. However their Digimon were forced to stay behind and part with their friends until next time the portal between the two worlds opened again.
(One Year Later)

 

TANK COP- Mimi got the pink hair yet?

DARK JESTER- Not quite. Besides, the lemon’s about Sora.

Chapter 1

 

TOGASHI- Looks like a long one.

DARK JESTER- Tell me about it.

"Sora? Are you ready yet?" Mimi yells from outside her door. She only had so much time here in Tokyo so she needed to spend it well.
"Eh... okay, be there in a minute..." Sora says quietly to her. But she knew it would be longer than that for she was crying, and she knew what it was about. She knew she missed her most favorite friend in the world that she lost so long ago... her friend Biyomon. She thinks about all their times together and begins to sob again into her tissue.

 

HELLRAVENMON- You’d think she’d get over it by now.

"Sora?" Mimi asks as she cracks the door. But as she sees Sora crying she gasps and runs in. "Sora! What are you crying? What's wrong?"
"It's nothing..." Sora replies sadly.
"Yes it is, I can tell these things. You can tell your friend Mimi all about it. Don't hold back what you feel, it's not good for you..." Mimi says comforting her.
"Well Mimi it's.... it's just that... I miss Biyomon!" She tells her crying into Mimi's shirt.
"Oh... there there Sora, we all miss them, ever since we left them that day... But remember, the portal will open again someday," Mimi tells her while patting her back.

 

TOGASHI- I thought they said the portal was closed for good?

RED ROVER- Then how would they get a second season?

"I know... but I don't think I can last for that long! I was fine up till a few days ago. I guess the length of time that has gone by until then has started to get to me..." Sora replies, still crying into Mimi's shirt sleeve.
Mimi sighs and thinks for a moment, then she says, "Okay Sora, let's skip the movie and take a trip down to Izzy's house."

 

RED ROVER- Threesome?

DARK JESTER- Boy are we impatient.

Sora looks up curiously and asks, "Izzy? Why should we go meet him?"
"I have an idea... just trust me," Mimi answers.
"Ok, I'll trust you," Sora says as she wipes her face off.
"Great! Let's walk there, you'll need the fresh air," Mimi tells her as she helps Sora get her jacket and then leave outside for a short walk around the block to Izzy's house.

Chapter 2

 

TANK COP- Are we getting to the lemon.

DARK JESTER- Come on, I am building anticipation.

Biyomon lays back on a tree and looks out into the lake as the sun beams reflect off it and make it shimmer. She smiles and sighs as she lets her mind wander. She begins to think of her journey's way back when. She thinks of her friends and all the others she met. But most of all, she thinks of the one who changed her whole life, the one who she could call her one true friend, Sora. Biyomon looks up in the sky and sees a cloud in her imagination make the shape of her, smiling down at her, watching her, and looking after her. "Sora... wherever you are, whatever your doing... I just want you to know... I love you..." Biyomon says as she looks up in the sky at her imaginary cloud.
"Biyomon? Where are you?" Gabumon yells from behind some bushes.
He walks out from them and sees Biyomon under the trees and asks, "Ah, there you are. The other guys have been looking for you Biyomon. You know it's your turn right?"

 

HELLRAVENMON- Turn for what?

RED ROVER- Well it is a lemon after all. Think hard.

"Yes... Tell them I'll be there in a moment, I just need a few minutes," Biyomon replies, keeping her stare at the sky.
Gabumon blinks and looks up at the sky, seeing nothing but a few shapeless clouds. He looks back down at Biyomon and sighs saying, "Alright... but please hurry."
Biyomon nods as he goes back into the brush and continues to stare at her imaginary cloud and says, "I miss you... Sora... hopefully we will see each other again in the distant future. Until then, I'll always keep you in my heart..."

 

TANK COP- Cue the mushy music.

RED ROVER- And even though we know how very far apart we are, it helps to think we might be wishing on the same bright staarrr…..

DARK JESTER-  Please stop singing. Please.

TOGASHI- Besides… they’re not even in the same dimension. They couldn’t be wishing on the same star.

RED ROVER- OK OK, can we get back to the lemon?

Her Cloud then slowly disappears out of her mind as she sheds a little tear that trickles down her face and falls onto the soft grass below. Biyomon then sighs and shakes it all off and gets up, she then says to herself, "Okay, time to focus on the task at hand..." She then looks around for a loose, strong vine nearby and sees one dangling from the tree she was under so flies up and it plucks it off with her beak a good, long portion of it and tests it with her fingers. "Hmmm.... this should be tight enough..." She then holds it in her beak and flies off into the brush.

 

HELLRAVENMON- Hmmmm, bondage….

Chapter 3

 

RED ROVER- Big into foreshadowing for this one I see…

"I think I could just make this work, if I use the data I collected while in the Digital World from my Laptop and connect it to the new data I've been collecting into my real computer, I may just be able to open a gate back to the digital world!" Izzy explains as he types on his Laptop while Sora and Mimi watch with high hopes.
"Do you think it would actually work? Could I actually get to see Biyomon again!?" Sora asks excitedly.
"It depends Sora, you see... the complex infrastructure of File Island has to be closely identical to the compounds within the one on my main computer. And if they can coexist, then..." Izzy beings to speak.
"Skip the explanation Izzy and just see if you can do it please," Sora tells him impatiently.
"Oh, right. I'll get right on it," Izzy says as he begins to work.
(A few minutes later)
"I got it Mimi, Sora! I can open a portal to the Digital World!" Izzy shouts to them as they lay on his bed talking.

 

TANK COP- That's all it took?  Three minutes?

DARK JESTER- Well he is a genius.

 
They jump up as he yells and Sora gets so excited she almost cries as she asks, "Really? Are you sure?"
"Yes, come over here and look," Izzy answers as he shows them his main computer screen.
Sure enough, there was a small portal on the screen ready to be entered. "Oh, you did it Izzy! Thank you so much!" Sora tells him as he hugs him tightly.
"Your... welcome.... but can your please... let me go..." Izzy struggles to say, losing air.
"Oh, sorry hehe," Sora says as he lets him go.
Izzy gasps for air and replies, "Thank you... Now then, I'm sure the others will want to hear about this so let me E-Mail them..." Mimi and Sora nod and wait patiently.
"Hmmm... they've all e-mailed back and I've talked to them about it, they agree that you should go Sora," Izzy tells them.

 

HELLRAVENMON- Guess they decided she would make the best lemon.

 
"Really? Oh that makes me... so happy..." Sora replies as she begins to cry a little again.
"But they are going to send me some letters for their Digimon to give you. So why don't you go and pack up?" Izzy questions.
"Yes, I agree!" Sora answers,
"We will be a little while then Izzy," Mimi tells him.
"Of course, come back as soon as you can," Izzy says.
They both nod and rush out the door and down the path back to Sora's house.
(30 minutes later)
"We're back Izzy!" Mimi shouts as they walk into the door.
"Up here!" Izzy yells down. Both Mimi and Sora run up and when they do, Izzy holds out the letters he printed out to them.
"They're all here along with mine," Izzy says.
Sora nods and takes all of them and puts them in her small backpack on her back.
"I already gave mine to Sora so..." Mimi says.

 

TANK COP- I also gave her my letter as well.

"Are we all ready then?" Sora asks Izzy.
"Yes, we are. But first you need to know that this portal will only stay open for a day, so you won't have much time," Izzy explains to her.
"I understand," Sora replies.
"Well then, let me open it up for you..." Izzy says as he presses a few buttons and then the portal rips open and glows many different, flashing colors on Izzy's computer.
"Good-bye Sora, and Good luck! When you get back we can go shopping!" Mimi tells her.

 

DARK JESTER- I would suggest condoms right about now.

"I'd like that Mimi, see you two in a day and tell the others the same thing," Sora tells them with a smile.
"Ok, now to enter, just press the enter key..." Izzy informs her. Sora nods and says on last good-bye as she presses the button and before she realizes it, the whole room flashes a bright yellow that makes her close her eyes. But when she opens them, she finds herself on the edge of a forest and near a lake, with the portal behind her.
She smiles widely and closes her palms together saying, "I'm here... now to find Biyomon!" So wastes no time and runs down the path in front of her.

Chapter 4

 

TOGASHI- come on, lemon!

"Yeah Biyomon... your so tight... it's great..." Gabumon states as he pumps in and out of her tight vagina.

 

TOGASHI- Whoa, okay, that was quick.

 

She had Agumon laying underneath her with his arms tightly around the side of her arms while entering her tiny anus hole and while Gabumon fucked her from her feet and her wings were tied tightly behind her back with the vine she got earlier while the vine was also wrapped around her waist tightly and had a knot tied to each of her legs. She moaned and panted through the tight towel gag wrapped around the back of her head and through her beak to keep everything but quiet moans and chirps from escaping.

 

HELLRAVENMON- Did I just miss a chapter or something?

DARK JESTER- We don’t always need a long complicate plot to jump into the lemon content.

RED ROVER- Speak for yourself.

Biyomon blushes a very bright red and looks down at Patamon and Gomamon who were feasting on her small nipples. It was finally her turn to be the sex toy for them but she didn't mind. Her hormones were raging and she loved every minute of this.

 

TOGASHI- Her turn?

RED ROVER- So when is Gatomon up?

"You think that's tight Gabumon? You should see down here *groan*..." Agumon says as he pumps speedily inside Biyomon's anus hole as she lets out louder muffled moans of extremely pleasureful delight.
"She's tasty too..." Patamon states as he pulls his mouth of her nipples and swallows the amount in his mouth before going back down to suck again.
"Biyomon? Where are you? I'm here to see you!" A very faint and familiar voice shouts.

 

TANK COP- One more partner?

DARK JESTER- Where would you put her?  Biyomon’s filled to capacity.

The others hear it and stop. "Who is that?" Gabumon asks as they all look in the direction of the voice. Meanwhile, Biyomon splits her eyes up and sits up so quickly that Gomamon and Patamon fall are hit in the head. Biyomon moans and struggles tremendously trying to tell them something.
"Huh? What is it Biyomon?" Agumon asks as he crawls from out of under her.
"I think she's trying to tell us something," Gomamon says as he rubs the top of his head.

 

HELLRAVENMON- His powers of perception are amazing.

 

"Then I think we should untie her eh?" Patamon asks. Biyomon nods as she continues to struggle out of her bondage. "Alright then," Agumon replies as he swipes at the bonds with his claws and makes them fall off. Biyomon then rips the gag right off and flies toward the direction of the sound screaming, "Sora! Is that you!?"
Sora hears the screaming coming in her direction and gasps and runs that way screaming back, "Biyomon? Is that you?"
Biyomon zooms through the clearing a few seconds later and spots Sora a few feet ahead and stops. Sora stops to and gasps again as she sees Biyomon in front of her.
"Sora... is it really you?" Biyomon asks with hope in her eyes.

 

RED ROVER- Not to mention sweat and cum.

 
"Yes Biyomon, I've found a way to come back... come back to you..." Sora tells her.
Biyomon stands there shocked and then is reduced to tears and flies into Sora's arms shouting, "Sora! It's you! It's really you! You've come back!"
Sora hugs her back and cries herself saying. "Oh Biyomon, I've missed you so much..."

 

HELLRAVENMON- I feel sorry for the guys. Surprised their heads haven’t burst.

DARK JESTER- Among other things.

"So have I Sora. I waited everyday hoping the gate would open again... I waited for the day I would see you once more..." Biyomon tells her, tears trickling down her face and onto the ground below.
"Me too Biyomon... but I only have a day here to catch up on things..." Sora says, still crying as they hug each other tightly.
"Only a day? Well, I know we can make the best of it," Biyomon says as she wipes her tears away.

 

TOGASHI- Make the best of it, talk about foreshadowing.

"Yes it will... By the way, where are the other Digimon? I got some letters for them from the others," Sora asks.
"Oh they should be..." Biyomon begins to answer but before she does, they hear rustling sounds and the whole group appear out of the brush ahead of Sora and Biyomon.
"Oh look! It's Sora!" Gabumon says with surprise as he runs up to her.

 

HELLRAVENMON- Orgy!

 
"Sora? Sora's here? Really?" Gomamon asks as he runs up to. They others gasp and run up as well and look at Sora as if they've never seen her before.
"Hi guys! Izzy found a way to let one of us back through for a short while, and so they nominated me. But don't worry, they all brought you letters! Here," Sora tells them as she sits down, takes off her pack, and gets out each of their letters and hands each one to them.
They all take their time to read the letters while Biyomon and Sora hug and talk with each other.
"Wow... Matt misses me... a lot... that's... heartwarming..." Gabumon says suddenly as he looks at his letter in disbelieve.
"Same old Tai, still making the same old jokes... Just the reason I like him..." Agumon says staring at his letter.
"Izzy hopes to see me again soon... So do I," Tentomon states reading his letter.
"Mimi... *sniff*" Palmon says as she begins to cry over her letter.
"I miss you too Joe... although I may have new friends, none of them make up for you," Gomamon says to his letter as if it were Joe himself.
"Don't worry Kari, we'll be seeing each other soon," Gatomon says as she looks up at the sky with a smile.
"Waaahhh!!! T.K.! WAAAHHH!!" Patamon cries and drenches his letter with tears.

 

TOGASHI- If that doesn’t prove that the pot roast is a girl, I don’t know what does!

RED ROVER- Boy!

TOGASHI- That’s it. En Guarde!  (Togashi and Red Rover start dueling with rapiers.)

"Everyone really does miss us all, huh Sora?" Biyomon asks looking up at her.
Sora nods and replies, "More than any of them know... Just as much as I missed you..."
Biyomon smiles and grabs her hand saying, "Come with me, I have a place to show you..."

 

HELLRAVENMON-  Hey, some lesbo action? (Sword fighting noise in the background.)

DARK JESTER- You’ll see.

Sora blinks and follows her while holding hands and Biyomon takes her into the brush, leaving the others behind. They walk for a little longer until Biyomon takes her to the area she was before with the tree by the lake. "We're here!" Biyomon says suddenly as she lets go of Sora's hand.
"Wow, what a beautiful area..." Sora replies looking around with sparkling eyes as the scenery.
"Remember this place?" Biyomon asks.
"No, have I been here before?" Sora asks confused.
"That tree over there," Biyomon begins, pointing to the tree. "That's where we said our good-byes.."
"Oh, of course! How could I forget," Sora says as her and Biyomon walk over to the tree.

 

HELLRAVENMON- Quite easily it seems. (Swords clanging.)  How long do you think it’ll be before they realize they can’t kill each other in a lemon?

TANK COP- A few more minutes.

"I came here every day to relax alone and to remember you. I never thought I would see you again at the exact same place we left each other..." Biyomon tells her.
Sora looks down at Biyomon and asks with teary eyes, "You really missed me didn't you?"
"Uh huh, more than anything..." Biyomon answers looking up at her.
Sora then picks up and hugs Biyomon again while crying and lays down on the back of the tree, Biyomon still in her arms.
"Please tell me Sora, what you've been doing since you left," Biyomon requests.
Sora nods and begins to tell her story as Biyomon listens and keeps her eyes on Sora's the whole time. After she finishes, Biyomon tells Sora her story while Sora caresses her feathers and her feet.

 

HELLRAVENMON- Enough teasing, get to the point!

DARK JESTER- Come on, a little set up is allowed.

After Biyomon finishes, Biyomon leans up closer to Sora's face and asks, "Sora?"
"Yes Biyomon?" Sora asks smiling back at her.
"I want... I want you to kiss me..." Biyomon tells her a little nervously.

 

HELLRAVENMON- All right. Red! Togashi! You’re missing the good stuff!

RED ROVER- (Blocking a downwards slash from Togashi.) Little busy right now.

 
Sora blinks and stares at her while asking, "Kiss you?"
"Yes... I've never been kissed before... I wanna know what it's like!" Biyomon states.

 

HELLRAVENMON- She just had group sex with all her digimon friends!

DARK JESTER- But she never was kissed.

Sora then smiles and says, "Well then, perhaps I should show you."
Sora then leans down to Biyomon's beak and kisses her there lightly. Biyomon blushes a little and kisses back as how she's seen it done, never knowing it was so pleasant.
"Mmmm... Sora I never realized how enjoyable kissing is..." Biyomon tells her as she stops the kiss.
"Oh, you haven't seen anything yet, here, let me show you more..." Sora says as she kisses Biyomon again and this time uses her tongue to roam around inside her small beak. Biyomon gasps at how it feels and gets very aroused by it so kisses her back in the same way.
"Oh, Sora..." Biyomon mutters out as she blushes a brighter red. But as they kiss, Sora gets a strange feeling inside her as if she was getting turned on and wonders why but shakes it off and tries to control it as best she can.
They keep the kiss going for two minutes or so before Biyomon stops and looks up at Sora. "Oh, thank you Sora... for showing me that..."
Sora smiles and nods replying, "Anything for you Biyomon..."

 

HELLRAVENMON- Here we come…

 
Just then, Agumon, Gabumon, and Patamon walk in from the brush and spot them.

 

HELLRAVENMON- Spoil sports!

 

"Sorry to bother you two but... we never finished our thing Biyomon," Agumon tells her.
"I'm sorry guys but... Sora appeared before we finished, let's finish it later," Biyomon says back.
"But... fine..." Agumon says disappointedly as he slowly turns away and him and the rest of them disappear into the brush.

 

TANK COP- The hormones would kill him… (Swords clanging in back ground.)

HELLRAVENMON- You’d think he’d go find Gatomon, Palmon, or maybe round up some Floramon or something.

TANK COP- Where are the two other digi girls anyway?

DARK JESTER- You’ll see.

 
"What was that all about Biyomon?" Sora asks curiously.
"I'll... tell you later..." Biyomon says looking away slightly.
Sora blinks and looks at Biyomon suspiciously but then shakes it off and replies, "Okay."
Sora them begins to caress Biyomon's soft feathery head and tail as she says, "Your so beautiful Biyomon..."
Biyomon smiles and relaxes replying, "Thank you Sora."
Sora smiles and suddenly gets the same feeling again and stronger this time and wonders why she is getting turned on like this by Biyomon. She never had these feelings before... Or did she really miss her more than she knew? Sora thinks to herself as Biyomon relaxes like a little kid in Sora's arms as Sora caresses Biyomon.
But she can't think of much more before she is jumped on by behind from Patamon, Gomamon, Tentomon, Gabumon, and Agumon. Biyomon is knocked to the side suddenly as they sit on Sora and hold her down.

 

RED ROVER-  (Looking away from sword fight.) Whoa, now this is getting interesting.

TOGASHI-  (Replacing his sword.) Yeah. (Both lemon writers take their seats.)

"What are you guys doing!?" Sora asks with confusion and slight fear.
"Sorry Sora but we can't control our hormones anymore. Before you got here Biyomon was helping us with that but you appeared before we were done. And seeing as we haven't seen any humans here, female for that matter, we got even more horny. My point is that... we can't take it anymore! We need you! No matter if you like it or not," Agumon explains to her.

 

RED ROVER- And I am sure that’ll make her feel much better.

 
Sora tries to move out of their grip but is overpowered with their added strength so just whimpers.
"Guys stop!" Biyomon shouts as she runs up.
"Poison Ivy!" Biyomon hears from behind and just as she looks back, many vines grab her arms, feet, and neck and hold her up off the ground.

 

TANK COP- When did she show up?

"Wh... what's going on?" Biyomon asks with slight fear as she tries to struggle out of the vines. She then sees Palmon walk out of the brush and smiles up at her saying, "Come now Biyomon. Let's leave the boys to their fun..."

 

TOGASHI- Did every digimon’s personality do a 180?

"Palmon what are you doing? Let me go! They're hurting Sora!" Biyomon tells her as she struggles more uselessly.
"Oh, they're going to do no such thing, they aren't gonna hurt her, just play with her," Palmon replies.

 

TOGASHI- I don’t think crazy eights is what they have in mind.

"Even so I..." Biyomon says but suddenly one of Palmon's vines comes up and wraps around her beak and closes it tight, cutting Palmon off to just muffled words.
"How about we don't talk and just watch, eh?" Palmon asks as she pulls Biyomon over and sets her on the ground on her butt while she stands begins Biyomon as they both watch the gangbang.
About this time, Sora had nothing on but a purple bra and panties as the Digimon had already pulled off the rest of her clothes. She shivers a little in the sudden breeze and says, "Guys, let's talk about this..."

 

HELLRAVENMON- Now she wants to talk dirty!

But Gabumon shakes his head and answers her, "There's nothing to talk about..." While slowly unhooking her bra and sliding it off onto the ground, exposing her bare breasts in the air. Sora eeks and tries again to get loose, harder this time but still can't seem to get anywhere with it.
She watches in fear as the last thing to hide her nakedness besides her blue hat that they conveniently left n her head is pulled down her legs and off to the side. She gulps as her body was now totally vulnerable to the horny Digimon surrounding her...

 

TANK COP- How did they remove her shirt without removing her hat?

"Oh my... how... exciting!" Palmon states, with a little eagerness.
But Biyomon thought otherwise as she greatly protested and struggled against it, yet was still barely moving at all as Palmon's vines were easily tight enough to incapacitate her movements so Biyomon just does the next best thing and whimpers sadly.
"Oh, quit whining, your fine and so is she," Palmon tells her with slight annoyance at all of Biyomon's protesting and wishes she would just calm down cause it's greatly tiring out her vines.
"Who gets what?" Patamon asks eager to get started.
"I get her mouth!" Gomamon shouts out.
"No, I get it!" Gabumon argues.
"I called it first!" Gomamon argues back.
"Okay, look guys, let's not argue... we'll draw straws!" Agumon says suddenly as he holds out a bunch of sticks.. "Ok, each one has colouring on the bottom. Yellow is for anus, Purple is for breast, Blue is for vagina, and red is for mouth." They all agree and while still holding Sora down as she gets a loss of words and can only watch as they draws.

 

TOGASHI- Where do they get colour coated sticks?

DARK JESTER-  Do you want the lemon or not?

"Hehe... anus is mine," Agumon states as he holds the yellow stick.
"Guess I get a breast then," Patamon says.
".... So do I..." Gabumon says disappointedly.
"I'm blue..." Gomamon says also disappointedly.
"Well then who got red?" Agumon asks curiously. They then all look at Tentomon who had their backs turned to them.
Tentomon behinds to snicker a bit and then turns around screaming, "Hahaha! I got red! I get her mouth! Hahaha lucky me!"

 

RED ROVER- Won’t you want her pussy?

DARK JESTER- To each is own.

 
"Yeah.... lucky...." Gomamon replies with a jealous face.
"Real.... lucky...." Gabumon replies also with a jealous face.

 

TOGASHI- Still, better than just her breast.

 
Tentomon suddenly stops his victory dance and turns to Gomamon and Gabumon who looks back curiously. "Hey, how about I trade with you guys?"
Gomamon gasps and asks, "Really?"
Tentomon then shouts, "NOT! Woohoo I am the luckiest bug alive!"
Both Gabumon and Gomamon sigh and look down at the ground both saying, "Stupid straws... I never did like that game..."

 

RED ROVER- No game is fun when you lose.

By this time Sora loses it and screams at them, "WHAT!? YOU THINK THIS IS SOME SORT OF A GAME? LET ME GO RIGHT NOW OR YOU'LL REGRET IT!!!"

 

HELLRAVENMON- Oh, they look like they’re regretting it.

They all cover their ears and then Agumon shouts, "Will someone shut her up!?"
Gabumon then slaps his front paw over her mouth and says, "Shhhh!"
Sora tries to scream some more but not only muffled sounds come out. "Okay, we've wasted enough time, I really can't take this much more, I need to get off now! So wherever your supposed to be, get there now!" Agumon commands and they all quickly scramble into position.
Sora eeks again and says, "Okay I'm sorry for yelling but... if you forget about the whole thing, I'll give you each some cupcakes I brought."

 

HELLRAVENMON- Now we are getting kinky.

RED ROVER- Who knew Sora was into that type of sex?

She grumbles under her breath as she realizes how stupid that sounded as Agumon looks up and says, "Cupcakes? I think we'll just take you instead..." He then slowly pushes his erect, tiny penis into Sora's butthole and moans as he does. She feels the pain from it and tries to scream but her mouth is suddenly filled with Tentomon's small penis but still enough to fill up most of Sora's mouth. Sora protests as the salty taste fills her mouth but dares bite in fear of getting something worse...

 

TANK COP- Trust me, I think if she bit down, Tentomon would get the worst of it.

 

 Meanwhile, Patamon and Gabumon rub her breasts, Patamon on the right and Gabumon on the left.
"These are so nice and soft...." Patamon states as he gets even more horny and squeezes it.
"Oh yeah..." Gabumon also says as he squeezes the other one like a plush toy.

 

TOGASHI-  How come you don’t see those type of plush toys at carnivals?

 
Meanwhile Gomamon sniffs and licks between Sora's legs and says, "Oh your sweet...." He then slowly climbs up between Sora's legs and pushes his erect penis into her vagina. Sora moans and whimpers at the same time as she becomes slightly aroused from all the rubbing and pumping.

 

RED ROVER- Slightly aroused? Just slightly?

DARK JESTER- Well it is against her will so far.

"Are you just gonna let it sit in there? Suck me off!" Tentomon commands tapping her roughly with his pointy fingers.

 

HELLRAVENMON- Since when did Tentomon have fingers?

DARK JESTER- Talons, claws, fingers, whatever!

 

Sora tries to yell and protest more but again, Tentomon makes sure her mouth stays tightly closed around his ever-ready penis.

 

RED ROVER- There’s an idea, tick off a girl with her teeth on your dick. Here’s another tradition from Earth, the circumcision.

 

Sora gives up and sucks on it slowly, just trying to end this as quickly as possible. Tentomon begins to moan and say, "Oh yeah..." Then, Agumon and Gomamon begin to moan loudly as they pump into their 'holes'. While Patamon and Gabumon begin feeding time.
Biyomon whimpers more and closes her eyes, daring not to watch but only manages to keep them closed for a moment at Palmon takes two vines and holds them open. Biyomon let's out muffled screams and tries to squirm away again but again can only move her eyeballs as she is again forced to watch the show.
"What's going on here?" Gatomon asks as she jumps though the bushes.

 

HELLRAVENMON- Looks like reinforcements have arrived.

"Oh, hi Gatomon, just watching these guys really go at it with Sora.
"Oh? And what's with Biyomon all tied up like that?" Gatomon asks looking at Biyomon who could only whimper and squirm.
"Oh well. I didn't want her to start a problem with the guys so I'm just making sure she will behave," Palmon tells Gatomon with a smile as if she cared nothing about Biyomon.
"I see, well can I join you guys then?" Gatomon asks.

 

HELLRAVENMON- Well, she’s changed personalities too, I see.

DARK JESTER- Well, she was always a slut.

"Sure take a seat," Palmon answers.
Gatomon nods and sits down, she then stares at the group and perks her ears up a little. "Wow... now THIS is interesting..." Palmon nods back as her attention is back on the group again.
Biyomon didn't believe this, not even Gatomon seemed to care how she felt. It's as if the whole digiworld was suddenly against her. She sadly whimpers more as she realizes there's just nothing to can do now...
"Oh gosh she's no where near Gatomon, Palmon, or Biyomon, she's even better!" Agumon states while moaning with delightful pleasure and pumping slowly faster inside her butthole every moment.

 

TANK COP- I am sure Biyomon would be much tighter. She’s a quarter of Sora’s size!

"Heck yeah, and quite delightful as well.," Gomamon replies while moaning himself and shoots some of his precum into Sora's wet and slightly dripping vagina.
"She's.... very... good... too..." Tentomon notes panting heavily from the exquisite delight his throbbing penis was receiving and rewards Sora's mouth with some 'gift cum'. Of course, to Sora, there was nothing good about it as it makes her cringe a little in disgust. But luckily it wasn't much and knowing there was no point to even try to spit it out and keep the taste longer in her mouth, swallows it although she gags a little as she does while still protesting and struggling uselessly with sad eyes.
"Oh I can't take it anymore, I need to get off now!" Patamon says suddenly as he pulls off Sora's breast and licks the milk off his lips as he begins to rub his very erect penis against Sora's breast.

 

TOGASHI- She’s not lactating, you have to have a baby for that!

DARK JESTER- Hey so it’s a fetish.

RED ROVER- An odd one.

DARK JESTER- Excuse me, we’re all digimon lemon writers. I think weird fetishes come with the territory.

"Ditto..." Gabumon agrees as he also stops sucking on Sora's breast and begins masturbating right in front of her.
Sora's protests and struggling slowly dies down and turns into more moaning as all the pleasure going through her whole body gradually takes control of her and she slowly begins to like it.
Oh I can't take it anymore... this is too much for me..." Gatomon says suddenly as she becomes very, very horny. She slowly turns to the encumbered Biyomon and smiles lustfully an walks in front of her face. Biyomon let's out muffled sounds and looks at her with both curiosity and slight nervousness. Gatomon grins and then slowly bends down and rubs Biyomon's exposed pussy. Biyomon gasps and tries to pull away but again is stopped by Palmon's vines and protests greatly at Gatomon.

 

DARK JESTER- There’s the lesbian action you wanted.

HELLRAVENMON- Thanks, and who better?

"Oh hush, you'll like it..." Gatomon tells her as she pushes one claw into Biyomon. Biyomon shudders as she feels a sudden pleasureful sensation between her legs which she has felt many times and begins to moan softly.
"Hehe there ya go Biyomon, let Gatomon pleasure you," Gatomon tells her as she slowly bends down and licks some of Biyomon's juices that were leaking out. "Mmm, tasty." Gatomon then begins to slowly lick the outside of Biyomon's clitoris. Biyomon moans a little louder as the pleasure she felt before gets a lot bigger and quite quick. Biyomon knew she hasn't had an orgasm for a while and just like before Sora appeared, she was still very horny, buy had just been too busy to notice it. Biyomon begins to blush slightly and doesn't fight anymore and let's Gatomon do whatever she likes without complaint. Gatomon licks up some more juices and then decides to push her tongue into Biyomon's love hole, licking against the side as she does. That causes Biyomon to jump and moan more, her eyes showing the ecstasy she was in.
Meanwhile, Palmon was watching this whole thing and was becoming very horny herself so asks, "Okay Biyomon, if I loosen these vines and ungag you, will you cause a problem?" Biyomon shakes her head in response with eagerness as the vines were very uncomfortable.

 

RED ROVER- You'd think she'd try to help Sora out.

DARK JESTER- That would end the lemon then.

RED ROVER- Good point.

"Alright then..." Palmon says as she slowly loosens her vines and ungags Biyomon.
Biyomon let's out a big sigh of relief as the vines come off around her beak and the rest of her body gets to relax and says to Palmon in a pleasureful voice, "Thanks a lot Palmon!"
Palmon nods and then leans over Biyomon's shoulder next to her beak and says, "Well since I did that for you, you have to do something for me... kiss me, tongue and everything for as long as you can."

 

TANK COP- Now that is an odd request.

DARK JESTER- Not in a lemon.

 
Biyomon blinks and then nods and leans over and kisses Palmon on the lips, immediately sliding her tongue in. Palmon moans and blushes a little herself as she kisses Palmon back in the exact same way, deciding to remove all the vines off of Biyomon. Biyomon smiles and thanks Palmon by kissing her even more deeply. Meanwhile, Gatomon was eagerly licking deep into Biyomon and gathering all her juices she can find and swallows them hungrily, some of it dripping off the sides of her face. Biyomon shudders more and tries her best to relax while Palmon walks in front of Biyomon while still in the kiss and begins to rub her pussy on Gatomon's stomach. Gatomon doesn't mind at all and giggles as she continues working. Biyomon closes her eyes as her whole body goes into happy land, doubting it could get any better.
Sora screams and moans in extreme and pleasureful delight while kicking in the air a little, her whole body was in pure ecstasy and gives out a quick and powerful orgasm. She moans as loud as she could and pants, she knew that wasn't going to be the only one as she already feels another on the way. Everyone seemed to be moaning in rhythm as each Digimon was close to their release too, Many drops of pre filling every hole and over her breasts form Patamon and Gabumon. She no longer minded the taste in her mouth as the pleasure seemed to drown it out and was now gulping the cum down like it was water.

 

TOGASHI- They always seem to swallow in lemons....

 
"Oh I can' take it much longer... I'm going to release any moment!" Gomamon shouts out. They all agree in their own ways as they pump and rub their dripping penises faster than ever now. Sora orgasms again about this time and spills more rich juices all over Gomamon's penis, ballsac, herself, and the ground below. The other Digimon give out their last amount of precum before each one of them seemed to orgasm all at once, Spilling their contents into Sora's butthole, Vagina, mouth, and her chest. She quickly swallows all that enters her mouth, struggling to keep it from slipping out of her mouth and suddenly sees her mouth cockless and looks seeing every Digimon collapsed on her body, panting heavily.

 

TANK COP- Would probably suffocate her under that sweaty heap of bodies.

"Gatomon.... Oooohhh... I... I can't hold it any longer!!! AAAHHH!!!!" Biyomon screams while breaking her and Palmon's kiss as she let's out an eagerly awaited orgasm all over and into Gatomon's mouth, filling her mouth up so quickly she chokes a little and coughs, pulling out while the rest spills on the grass.
Gatomon swallows what she can while Palmon speeds up her rubbing on Gatomon's stomach. "Oh come on... it's coming! Ooohhh it's coming!" Palmon screams also and soon after, orgasms herself and sprays her rich fluids all over Gatomon's stomach. Gatomon giggles seeing Palmon spray all over her while she cleans up the rest of her meal and they all seem to collapse on her at once.
"What... about... you Gatomon? You... never... orgasmed...." Biyomon asks with a very panting voice.
"Don't' worry about me, I had enough fun with you," Gatomon tells Biyomon with another little giggle.

 

TOGASHI- Aw, ending already?

DARK JESTER- Geeze, it's already ten times as long as a normal lemon!

After a good rest, Sora finally sits up and hugs all the Digimon saying, "Oh thanks guys, I loved it."
"See I told you she'd love it," Tentomon says suddenly.
But they all suddenly look at him and reply, "No you didn't!"
"Well, I was going to..." Tentomon says back with a little sweatdrop.
Sora giggles and puts them on the ground and walks over to the ladies. "Well it seems you were busy Biyomon," Sora says as she picks her Digimon up.
Biyomon blushes and replies, "Yeah... and did you have fun?"
"Oh yes... the others are great..." Sora states as she looks at all the semen on her body. "Dear me, I better clean off, excuse me." Sora then places Biyomon the ground and walks over to the lake and slowly gets in with a relaxing sigh.

 

TANK COP- Care to help me clean up Biyomon?

Biyomon smiles at her as Palmon slowly get up and says, "Sorry for doing that to you Biyomon..."

 

RED ROVER- Amazing how people always say they're sorry after the fact.

"It's okay, I know you were only trying to help, although I despised it at the beginning, it came out for the better," Biyomon replies with a big smile.
Palmon smiles back and suddenly everyone's attention is turned to the bushes as some sort of electric blast appears in the sky for an instant.
Sora sees it and gasps as it was from where the teleported was so quickly cleans off, puts on her clothes, picks up her backpack, and runs in that direction.
"Sora where are you going?" Biyomon asks, but Sora was running to fast to hear her to the other Digimon do their best to keep up.
As Sora reaches the clearing, she gasps again as she sees Izzy's face on the other side of the teleporter. "Sora you're here! Hurry back! Apparently the teleporter device has become too unstable and will close any moment!"
"What... but I haven't been here very long!" Sora tells Izzy upsettingly in disbelief.

 

TOGASHI- She's still horny?

 
"Well I'm sorry Sora but there is nothing I can do..." Izzy responds.
Sora sighs sadly as Biyomon and the rest run out of the clearing. "What's going on Sora?" Biyomon asks worriedly.
"Biyomon... I... have to go..." Sora tells her sadly.
"But you just got here! We still have much to talk about!" Biyomon replies.
"I have no other choice, the way I got here is about to close..." Sora tells her.
Biyomon looks at Sora sadly and then cries as she hugs Sora again. "I'll miss you..."
"Me too Biyomon, looks like we'll have to say out good-byes once again..." Sora says as she cries a little too and hugs her back.
The others looks at Sora and Biyomon and begin to cry a little themselves. Sora then puts Biyomon back on the ground and gets ready to leave. But just as she is about to leave, she turns back around to them and says, "Oh I almost forgot..." She then takes off her pack and unzips it, showing a bunch of white cupcakes with pink creme on them and sprinkles. "Each may take one except you Biyomon, I got you a special one."
They all slowly go over and take one, then Sora leans down and holds out a pure chocolate one to Biyomon. "Your favourite..." Sora says to her.

 

TOGASHI- Ah, so she did have cupcakes?

TANK COP- How did they stay together after all that? You'd think they'd be mush.

 
Biyomon gasps and takes it both happily and sadly as she knows this is the only thing left of Sora after she leaves. "I'll try to keep it, to remember you by Sora until you return, again."
Sora laughs a little and says, "I made it more for eating but do whatever you wish."
But Biyomon doesn't laugh and just stares up at her with the same teary eyes. Sora looks back and sighs and hugs Biyomon one last time saying, "I'll see you again, Biyomon, count on it..." She then gives Biyomon a good-bye kiss on the forehead and gets back up and waves.
The other Digimon wave back while Biyomon just holds the cupcake close to her chest and sadly watches Sora enter the portal and watches it close behind her. She then says quietly, "Good-bye again... Sora..." And cries a little more.

 

RED ROVER- Then she is stalked by the horny Gatomon...

Chapter 5

 

HELLRAVENMON- More lemon?

DARK JESTER- Just cleaning up the loose ends.

Sora sees more flashing lights and then suddenly finds herself back in Izzy's room again and the portal completely gone. "What took so long?" Izzy asked.
"Sorry, but I was giving my good-byes," Sora tells him.
"I'm sorry again about the portal, I didn't expect it to do that..." Izzy says.
"It's not your fault Izzy, don't worry about it," Sora tells him with a smile.
Izzy looks at her and smiles back as Mimi walks up to her and says, "So what did you do there with the time you had?"

 

RED ROVER- Gave knew meaning to the term whore.

 
Sora looks at her and then answers, "Weren't we going to the mall? Well then let's go! We don't have much time left!"
"But what about..." Mimi begins but Sora zooms right past her and down the stairs.
Mimi looks confused at Izzy who shrugs and Mimi runs after her screaming, "Wait for me Sora!"
But Sora keeps running until she is at the front door and then waits for Mimi.
Mimi runs up and pants as she says, "Why did you run off like that?"
Sora then looks around and whispers into Mimi's ear, "I'll tell you later..."

 

TOGASHI- Oh yeah. I was gang raped by all the males while Palmon got all hentai on Biyomon.

 
Mimi shows a confused look and then seemed to understand and nods, they then thank Izzy and leave his house and head back to Sora's house.

 

RED ROVER- I can see how she would understand. Sora had that 'just got gangbanged' look in her eyes.

The whole time was mostly silent as Sora thinks of her time with the Digimon and is glad to know she'll have more than one thing to be eager about when she sees the Digimon again.

 

HELLRAVENMON- Boy they turned her into a slut quickly.

(And eventually, they all do go back and Sora and the rest of the Digidestined are again reunited with their Digimon and the Digimon each show their own special way of greeting them. Sora knew in what way too...)

 

TANK COP- Sounds like you got a big orgy planned in the future.

DARK JESTER- Maybe….

THE END

 

HELLRAVENMON- Was beginning to think we'd never hear those words. Not that we weren't enjoying it.

 
HOLY F*CKING SHI* was that a LONG story! But hey, I think you guys will enjoy that. ^^ Took me a while to finish but... I did it. Stay tuned for more later, but until then, enjoy this one at best you can, and I think you know what I mean too. ^_~

TANK COP- You were right that was a long one!

HELLRAVENMON- But a rather intense one.

TOGASHI- I'll say!

DARK JESTER- Thanks. I'd just wish SonimodB, Metal Mikemon, Boss Reo, and Christine were here to see it.

TANK COP- I wonder were are audience is going?

HELLRAVENMON- It's not like Red Rover's critic's series is that bad.

RED ROVER- Okay, that’s it!  I am going to bring back some more writers. We don’t even have enough for a decent audience now! (Storms down to the lemon writer reanimator.)

TOGASHI- Geeze, what’s eating him?

TANK COP- Well, we are losing lemon writers left and right.

HELLRAVENMON- Wonder what’s happening to them all. (Bats fill the theatre, and form a dark portal.)

MYSTERIOUS MAN- (Walks out of portal.) I happened.

DARK JESTER- Oh good! Fun!

TOGASHI- Not too worried, cheap rip off Myotismon.

MYSTERIOUS MAN- Pathetic threats from mere humans.

HELLRAVENMON- He’s got the villainous speech down right.

DARK JESTER- It doesn’t matter. Witness the awesome powers of DARK JESTER! (Dark Jester’s forms grows, and envelops in dark energy.) YAH! (Fires a blast of dark energy into the Mysterious Man.)

TANK COP- Nice.

HELLRAVENMON- Impressive.

DARK JESTER- Yeah! Who’s the man! (Energy disappears, revealing the Mysterious Man.)

MYSTERIOUS MAN-  That would be me. Your resistance is futile.

TOGASHI- Okay, that’s not a good sign.

MYSTERIOUS MAN-  Still waiting for that awesome power.

DARK JESTER- Uh, that was my entire repertoire.

MYSTERIOUS MAN- (Holds out his hands, and they burst into flames.) Want to see mine?

DARK JESTER- Uh... no?

MYSTERIOUS MAN- Too bad. Now follow me too my underground lair, too meet your friends.  With Red Rover now alone, he too will fall before my awesome might!  MUHAHAHAHA!

NARRATOR-  What does the Mysterious Man have planned for the lemon writers? And what does he have in store for Red Rover? And why does the Mysterious Man have such an annoying laugh?

MYSTERIOUS MAN-  It’s a trademark of the villains. (Aims hand at narrator.) Deal with it.

NARRATOR- Uhhh.…Tuneinnexttimeforthecrtic’sseriesgottago. (Runs off.)

MYSTERIOUS MAN- Coward. Nice voice though. Now on to my lair!

 

And that was the continuation of my Critic series.  Thanks to Dark Jester, SonimodB, Togashi, Metal Mikemon, Tank Cop, Hellravenmon, and Boss Reo.  Any comments, requests, question, writing  tips, etc, e-mail me at mrredrover@hotmail.com.

Proofread by: Madman