05-19-2010, 04:43 PM
Ok, I decided to write a lemon about how i got my powers, and this is what i have so far.
Hello and welcome all to my newest lemon. And now an interruption from
the disclaimer! This material contains adult content not meant for readers under the
age of 18. All characters from this story are mine and whoever uses them in
something besides fan art must have my permission and give me credit. Now then,
on with the lemon.
I sat in my black leather desk chair listening to Fleetwood Mac and typing a storm
when I heard a knock on the door. I got up and opened the door only to be met in
the face with a rag of what I’m sure now is chloroform. When I woke up my head
was swimming and all I could think about was shooting the guy that drugged me.
“Good, you’re up.” I heard a voice exclaim from an old speaker. “Are you the one
who drugged me?” I asked the voice with a hint of annoyance. “Yes, yes I am.
Right now you’re in a special designed room, so don’t think about trying to escape
with your powers.” The ominous voice echoed. “What powers?” I asked getting
more pissed by the second. “So he doesn’t know. Good. Maybe we can use him for
our purposes.” The voice said in another room, “Are you sure he won’t go berserk
like the others did?” asked another voice in the room, “Yes, this one is designed
specially so he won’t go berserk.” Was the answer given before the voice pushed a
button on the control console causing knock-out gas to fill my room.I once again
awoke in a daze as I found myself in the middle a an empty field, wearing a black
armani suit “I dont mind the threads but why did you kidnap me?” I questioned
anyone who might hear me. I suddenly heard a voice from my ear, I checked, a bug
“I am called Nermes,
as for why you are here... well just ask the computer.” was all I Nermes said before
a green
screen appeared infront of me saying “hello_.”. I touched the screen out of
curiosity and it flashed a million of bright lights as information passed by infront
of my eyes “Amazing! I'm reading what I had for lunch, it had that much fat? Oh
well, since I have access, I should hack there systeeeaaaahhhh!!!” I screamed as
my suit shocked me and a different voice was in my head this time “Bad boy, looks
like knowledge isn't enough for you, guess I'll break you. Heh ha” She giggled
before I passed out from pain. Again. Fuck I hate when that happens.“Damn it,
why do people keep knocking me out!” I shouted not realizing the state I was in
until I tried to move my arms. I found that my arms and legs were strapped to a
huge king sized bed in spread eagle position, and I had a black leather collar with a
D-ring attached to it around my neck.
As you can tell, its in my "lemon format" so to speak and I want a bit of criticism to see how I'm doing.
Hello and welcome all to my newest lemon. And now an interruption from
the disclaimer! This material contains adult content not meant for readers under the
age of 18. All characters from this story are mine and whoever uses them in
something besides fan art must have my permission and give me credit. Now then,
on with the lemon.
I sat in my black leather desk chair listening to Fleetwood Mac and typing a storm
when I heard a knock on the door. I got up and opened the door only to be met in
the face with a rag of what I’m sure now is chloroform. When I woke up my head
was swimming and all I could think about was shooting the guy that drugged me.
“Good, you’re up.” I heard a voice exclaim from an old speaker. “Are you the one
who drugged me?” I asked the voice with a hint of annoyance. “Yes, yes I am.
Right now you’re in a special designed room, so don’t think about trying to escape
with your powers.” The ominous voice echoed. “What powers?” I asked getting
more pissed by the second. “So he doesn’t know. Good. Maybe we can use him for
our purposes.” The voice said in another room, “Are you sure he won’t go berserk
like the others did?” asked another voice in the room, “Yes, this one is designed
specially so he won’t go berserk.” Was the answer given before the voice pushed a
button on the control console causing knock-out gas to fill my room.I once again
awoke in a daze as I found myself in the middle a an empty field, wearing a black
armani suit “I dont mind the threads but why did you kidnap me?” I questioned
anyone who might hear me. I suddenly heard a voice from my ear, I checked, a bug
“I am called Nermes,
as for why you are here... well just ask the computer.” was all I Nermes said before
a green
screen appeared infront of me saying “hello_.”. I touched the screen out of
curiosity and it flashed a million of bright lights as information passed by infront
of my eyes “Amazing! I'm reading what I had for lunch, it had that much fat? Oh
well, since I have access, I should hack there systeeeaaaahhhh!!!” I screamed as
my suit shocked me and a different voice was in my head this time “Bad boy, looks
like knowledge isn't enough for you, guess I'll break you. Heh ha” She giggled
before I passed out from pain. Again. Fuck I hate when that happens.“Damn it,
why do people keep knocking me out!” I shouted not realizing the state I was in
until I tried to move my arms. I found that my arms and legs were strapped to a
huge king sized bed in spread eagle position, and I had a black leather collar with a
D-ring attached to it around my neck.
As you can tell, its in my "lemon format" so to speak and I want a bit of criticism to see how I'm doing.
"Let the future tell the truth and evaluate each one according to his work and accomplishments. The present is theirs; the future, for which I really worked, is mine." Nikola Tesla