Beach Bums. (DarkFlamedramon (F) x Agumon, Veemon and Guilmon)

[DragonMasterX]

"As she lied down" a common tense confusion here, lied has the -ed inflectional ending so that essentially drags this present tense into past and that's no good. Lay would be a better word to use here.

It IS supposed to be the past tense. o: Plus the verb "to lie" (as in lie down, a phrasal verb, as well) is a regular verb, therefore, the '-ed' inflection is not misused, tense-wise. If you're saying "Lay", would've been a better word, then that's a horse of a whole different color, lol. Hmm... "To Lay" is dangerous to use in my opinion. People seem to immediately think of a hen and an egg. That's what I've observed anyway! Thanks for your input.

I'm glad you liked it Dark Chibi. Next time, don't leave your opinion obviated, I want my requesters to tell me if they liked it or not, damnit! lol.