04-23-2011, 09:13 AM
Quite good, and you may have broke Veemon more than once during the fic but hey, He got to lose his virginity with Gatomon so he can't complain much.
Though I wonder why if Gatomon wanted to be with Patamon she accepted to be on a relationship with Veemon in first place? that part left me confused.
Another thing that left me confused was that Veemon said he lost his virginity over thirty years ago with Gatomon but the year the fic takes place is 2020. Veemon appeared in 2002 meaning that he only had known Gatomon for 18 years, so where did you got the extra 12 years? o.o
Though I wonder why if Gatomon wanted to be with Patamon she accepted to be on a relationship with Veemon in first place? that part left me confused.
Another thing that left me confused was that Veemon said he lost his virginity over thirty years ago with Gatomon but the year the fic takes place is 2020. Veemon appeared in 2002 meaning that he only had known Gatomon for 18 years, so where did you got the extra 12 years? o.o
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