Altima's short short stories

[Altima]

Yay, I iz using this thing again. Been a while. this next bit is just a sample of chapter 4 of "Cross Deception" that I wanted to post, and get some feedback on. So hope you guys enjoy.

This is quite a long chapter, so there's some more stuff before this sample, so I'll just summarize: Anzel/Sierra and Rick go to an end-of-summer festival, where they can watch some fireworks. They're sitting at the edge of a creek, when they suddenly get a lil' passionate.




"So," Rick began, as she show entered a brief lull in the amount of brightly-colored blasts in the sky, "Out of curiosity, am I your first boyfriend?"

I paused to think for a moment. True he was my first boyfriend, since this summer had been the only summer sofar where I felt I had an expressed interest in another boy. But now that I thought about it, I hadn't had any luck with any girls either, so in truth he was my first relationship period. "Yeah, you're my first, why?"

"I was just curious, wondered if you had any kind of experience." He responded, as I felt him shift his legs, brushing gently against mine. "Yeah, you're my first girlfriend, too."

"Aww..." I cooed playfully, as I placed my free hand against his chest, tracing minute circles on his chest. "Isn't that adorable? First-time couple!" I felt him shift some more against my touch.

"M-mhmm..." He muttered nervously, as I watched him blush under his fur. He glanced at me quietly, before gazing off somewhat blankly into the distance. I kept staring into his eyes, watching the fireworks reflected glossily against them. Smiling, I turn back to face the fireworks, though I decide to use Rick as a pillow a little more, sliding my down along his side, aiming for his lap- Until he jerks away a little, gasping softly. I felt my cheek a little, knowing that I felt something poke it.

"... What was that?" I ask, blinking repeatedly.

He fumbled away, leaning forward sharply, before answering. "It's uhh- nothing!" He shifted his arms slightly, resting them across his thighs. I raised an eyebrow questioningly at him, about to ask him what was really up, before it dawned on me.

"Are you- do you have a- ?" I began, rubbing my cheek with one hand, and pointing at his crotch with my other. Through his arms, I could see something of a lump in the crotch of his pants. He glanced sidelong at me, his hands still on his thighs, before nodding his head slowly, a definite blush on his face.

"Ooh, can I see?" I blurted out almost instantly after he nodded.

"wha-?" he asked confusedly, leaning back slightly as I could see the lump in his pants give a quick pulse. I smiled, laughing softly in response, which caused him to blush even more.

"Aww, it's okay Rick, I just wanna see it." I repeated. I wasn't exactly 100% ready to stare at someone elses penis just yet, but since it was Rick, and he happened to have a hardon, curiosity kind of took over. "I mean, if you're okay with me seeing it." I added, seeing his flustered face.

"Err, I guess..." Rick muttered, as he calmed slightly, giving me a quick smile as he sat up some more, giving me a clear view of the tent in his jeans. He began to undo his belt buckle a little nervously at first, fumbling with the clasp for a few seconds. He mastered his nerves quickly, however, as he soon had the belt unbuckled, and began to unzip his pants, before pulling both outer and undergarments down below his knees.

I gasped as I took in the entirety of his penis. I knew that not every penis was the same, and I heard that other races could have crazy looking penises, but me having never seen another penis before, I was both shocked and awed. Ricks' boyhood was glistening a fleshy pink and erect, with several rows of fleshy barbs all around his penis. His shaft began rather thick, shrinking in diameter slowly along the rest of his shaft, before tapering out. I stared in amazement for a few good moments, taking in the sight of his penis. I was so infatuated with it, I almost didn't hear him ask me what I thought about it.

"So Sierra, wh-what do you think?" He asked, his penis giving another shudder, the fireworks reflected briefly off the glistening barbs.

"I-it's bigger than m- Than I thought!" I managed to say, almost blurting out that I had a penis. Truth be told, Rick did seem to have a much longer, and thicker penis than I did, which kind of made me jealous, but it was still a magnificent sight. "It looks kinda prickly." I said sarcastically, as I leaned closer. "Do they hurt?" I asked, pointing towards the barbs.

"No," Rick said, as he ran a finger along the top of his barbed penis, pulling the barbs with the tip of his fingers, as they folded rather spongily. "They're actually really soft, and squishy."

"Can I feel?" I asked, reaching a clawed hand towards his length. I waited for him to nod in approval, before clenching my fist around it. It felt totally foreign in my hand. I could feel a gentle heat emanate from his penis. Like he had mentioned earlier, it felt squishy, and despite its shiny appearance, it wasn't slimy or anything. I played a tip of my finger along a few of the barbs which deformed to my touch. Ricks' penis suddenly pulsated in my grip, as I heard him groan softly. I looked up at him, and smiled encouragingly. "Does it feel nice having me touch your penis?"

Rick murred softly, as he nodded. I gripped his penis a little tighter, and was awarded with another soft moan, as Rick leaned a little further back. I chuckled softly to myself, as I looked back and forth between his shaft and his face. I began to stroke his meat gently, feeling it expand and contract in my hand for just a brief moment as it throbbed. As I neared the base of his shaft, I felt the bottom of my hand come into contact with his fur, and as I looked down to examine his furry sheathe, I came across his furred balls. Without even asking I slipped my hand down between his legs, and cupped both balls. Rick shivered in delight, as I felt his balls. I tried to compare them to what I remembered my balls felt like. His were definitely bigger, but then again it could have been all the fuzz of his fur that made them seem large. Rick gave a soft murr as I gripped his balls gently.

"Heheh, does Rick enjoy having his privates played with?" I asked sarcastically. He nodded with a soft murr.

"Mhh, yeah-" he tried to say, before being cut off by a moan, as I gave his balls another quick squeeze. He leaned back farther, propping himself on his elbows. I stood silent for a while, as my hand traveled up and down his crotch playing with both shaft and balls, simply watching his expressions. After a while, Rick closed his eyes, as I continued to tease and play. I smiled, and almost gasped as I felt something slimy oozing down my fingers. I looked back at his penis, stopping mid-stroke, and realized he was beginning to pre, as clear liquid oozed from the tip of his barbed penis. I released his penis, bringing my hand close to my face as I spread my fingers apart and watched his pre stretch web-like between them.

From out of nowhere this sudden thought possessed me, as I closed my eyes and slipped my pre-cum-filled fingers into my mouth, and sucked on them. His pre tasted rather sweet, and candy-like. I heard Rick gasp, as I opened one of my eyes and looked towards him. I guess he had been watching me once I let go of his penis. I slipped my fingers out of my mouth, and smiled at him, as I licked my lips. His pre had tasted actually delicious, and for some unknown reason, I wanted more. for a moment we only stared at each other, a look of shock on his face. I made the first move, as I dove gracefully between both of his legs, my lips hovering mere inches from his pre-stained penis. I breathed along the tip of his penis, feeling that only nerves had stopped me from engulfing his shaft. I had to think about it for a moment. This would be my first major gay experience, so was this what I wanted? Of course my mind was saying "Hell Yes!", but I was waiting for something, anything to happen. I saw Rick through the edge of my vision staring at me with a look of pleading as he understood why I was hovering above his crotch. I came to a silent agreement then, that I should go along with it, because it was what both of us wanted, and I knew deep down inside that this would further our relationship.

I stuck the tip of my tongue out between my lips, and flicked it across the tip of his penis, scooping a little precum along the way. Rick groaned softly, as he watched me slip my tongue back into my mouth, and savor the taste of his pre. Once again, I had this sensational craving for even more. If I had any notion of wanting to stop, it was now gone completely. I placed my hand against his crotch, wrapping my thumb and index finger around the very base of his crotch, as I opened my jaws, and dragged my tongue up and down his length, his barbs tickling the tip of my tongue. The sounds Rick began to make had an even further effect of turning me on, so much that I almost wanted to stop exploring and getting used to his penis and just ravage him. Keeping my inhibitions magically in check, I began to stroke his meat, trying to squeeze it roughly where I knew my "pleasure" spots were located on my penis, as I parted my mouth slowly, and inserted the tip of his penis into my maw. Rick gasped, as I slid his length deeper into my mouth, feeling his bards scrape gently along the insides of my mouth. I kept slurping his length further into the back of my mouth, until I suddenly felt my gag reflex kick in. I still hadn't fit his entire shaft into my mouth, which was somewhat dissapointing, but I knew in time I'd be able to handle such a feat.

Now that I had most of his penis in my mouth, I did what I thought was a good idea, and nibbled along his shaft gently. I guess his penis was sensitive, because he yipped and jerked briefly. I hesitated, as I felt his tip poke the roof of my mouth. I tried to think about what I could do. I felt a little awkward, wanting to give him a good blowjob, but unsure of how to do it. Well, I remember watching in porn the woman would bob her head up and down along the guys' length. I did the same, as I pull myself off his penis slowly, until I reached his tip, before pushing downward, letting it slide back into place. Almost immediately Rick pressed both paws against the side of my head, just under my horns. He was guiding me slightly, as I bobbed my head up and down. For some reason I had this urge to suck, so I followed my instinct, and sucked a little once I raised my head up and reached the tip once again. I had never heard a guy make such a high pitched squeal like that before. rick thrusted into my mouth so sharply I almost gagged, but ended up giggling around his dick, which made his length throb hard. So sucking does help, I thought, as I slurped along his length. His more calmer moans after that told me he was very sensitive, especially around the tip.