My usual approach of bitching about plot and realism doesn't really work here because I see you weren't really focused on or worried about either at the moment, so complaining about them would be like complaining about the lack of prostitutes in Sesame Street. I didn't notice any grammatical errors or strange spacing, and I appreciated the added humour at the end.
If anything, the story made me want to read the continuation because I'm curious about the development at the beginning. Now I'm wondering if that was intentional. ... WELL PLAYED.
If anything, the story made me want to read the continuation because I'm curious about the development at the beginning. Now I'm wondering if that was intentional. ... WELL PLAYED.
In soviet goggles, Russia does nothing.