"A Week in the Life" Chapter 1: Monday
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"A Week in the Life" Chapter 1: Monday
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04-06-2010, 04:08 AM
Nice story you got here, and pretty good way of discribing the main character. Very good, and funny, ending to a chapter as well. I see nothing wrong with the story as far as I can see. though i can't see far without my glasses -_-
In all a good opening chapter. Many times lost, many times found again.
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"A Week in the Life" Chapter 1: Monday - by Frisk E. Coyote - 04-02-2010, 03:17 PM
RE: "A Week in the Life" Chapter 1: Monday - by Guilmon and a shotgun - 04-03-2010, 10:55 AM
RE: "A Week in the Life" Chapter 1: Monday - by Frisk E. Coyote - 04-05-2010, 11:42 AM
RE: "A Week in the Life" Chapter 1: Monday - by Asesino - 04-06-2010, 01:51 AM
RE: "A Week in the Life" Chapter 1: Monday - by fred_18_2008 - 04-06-2010, 04:08 AM
RE: "A Week in the Life" Chapter 1: Monday - by Frisk E. Coyote - 04-06-2010, 08:29 AM
RE: "A Week in the Life" Chapter 1: Monday - by fred_18_2008 - 05-05-2010, 11:23 PM
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