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Blackwargreymon's Desires Part 1 (Warning, Lemon)

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Blackwargreymon's Desires Part 1 (Warning, Lemon)
Ninja_Kharlan Offline
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04-25-2011, 04:07 AM
Terrible. Non descriptive, senseless, pointless, did I mention non descriptive? It was also too straight foward, and you need to space your paragraphs better, nothing artistic about it.
Can't say I got horny off that in any way, and you were even playing on one of my more enjoyed fetishes.
Sad ninja is sad. Well, off to the next one. I hope it's slightly more descriptive.
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04-25-2011, 09:37 AM
(04-25-2011 04:07 AM)Ninja_Kharlan Wrote: Terrible. Non descriptive, senseless, pointless, did I mention non descriptive? It was also too straight foward, and you need to space your paragraphs better, nothing artistic about it.
Can't say I got horny off that in any way, and you were even playing on one of my more enjoyed fetishes.
Sad ninja is sad. Well, off to the next one. I hope it's slightly more descriptive.

That really offended me. Please don't talk to me anymore.
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Blackwargreymon's Desires Part 7 is the last story of the series, regardless of what it says in the post. I will not be making anymore parts to it.
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