04-03-2010, 10:55 AM
Best. Ending. Ever!
You really have a knack for stories Ray,your dialogue is interesting, it's variated and you've really captured the heterosexuality of Prowl.
I can't see any flaws here, so all i can say is well done and i'll be eagerly waiting for the next one!
You really have a knack for stories Ray,your dialogue is interesting, it's variated and you've really captured the heterosexuality of Prowl.
I can't see any flaws here, so all i can say is well done and i'll be eagerly waiting for the next one!
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